Story/Normal 1-4 (Part1)/Script: Difference between revisions

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Scene 1-4-1

Helian: … Commander, I'll explain the details on this mission so please pay attention.

Helian: We have a T-doll VZ-61 who is currently missing in action. We suspects that she has already fallen into enemy hands .

Helian: She might carry some important intel, so we must retrieve her.

Helian: Right now our primary goal is to locate this missing T-doll so that we can start rescue operation as soon as possible.

Helian: Commander, your task is to search this area for a SANGVIS FERRI command post, and gather valuable operational records.

Helian: One more thing, commander.

Helian: Unlike the previous outposts, the enemies here will actively search for and attack our echelons. Please be careful.

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 Scene 1-4-1
-:Helian: … Commander, let me explain the details on this mission. Please pay attention.
+:Helian: … Commander, I'll explain the details on this mission so please pay attention.
-:Helian: We have a T-doll modeled VZ-61 missing in action. We suspect that she has already fallen into enemy hands .
+:Helian: We have a T-doll VZ-61 who is currently missing in action. We suspects that she has already fallen into enemy hands .
 :Helian: She might carry some important intel, so we must retrieve her.
 :Helian: Right now our primary goal is to locate this missing T-doll so that we can start rescue operation as soon as possible.
-:Helian: Commander, your task is to search this area for a SANGVIS FERRI command post, and gather valuable operation record.
+:Helian: Commander, your task is to search this area for a SANGVIS FERRI command post, and gather valuable operational records.
 :Helian: One more thing, commander.
-:Helian: Different from the previous outposts, the enemies here will actively search for and attack our echelons. Please be careful.
+:Helian: Unlike the previous outposts, the enemies here will actively search for and attack our echelons. Please be careful.