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Commander,

Early this morning I had the strangest ~~dream—you~~'d turned into a little kid, tugging at my sleeve and demanding candy⋯ and you even threatened that I couldn't go back to sleep unless I gave you some.

Early this morning I had the strangest dream — you'd turned into a little kid, tugging at my sleeve and demanding candy⋯ and you even threatened that I couldn't go back to sleep unless I gave you some.

Waaah, so scary⋯

It wasn't until 416 shook me awake that I realized today is actually Children's Day. I'm not sure if I was somehow sensing your sweet tooth or if it was just my imagination⋯ Either way, if I didn't follow through, there was no way I could sleep peacefully.

It just so happens the base was handing out candy today, so! ragged myself out of bed, grabbed a portion, and left it on your desk⋯ That should settle it, right? If there's nothing else, I'm going back to catch up on my sleep now⋯

It just so happens the base was handing out candy today, so I ragged myself out of bed, grabbed a portion, and left it on your desk⋯ That should settle it, right? If there's nothing else, I'm going back to catch up on my sleep now⋯

Oh, and remember to store the candy properly so it doesn't ~~melt—I~~'m not cleaning up any syrupy mess! Mmm⋯ ZzzzzzzZ⋯

Oh, and remember to store the candy properly so it doesn't melt — I'm not cleaning up any syrupy mess! Mmm⋯ ZzzzzzzZ⋯

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 Commander,
-Early this morning I had the strangest dream—you'd turned into a little kid, tugging at my sleeve and demanding candy⋯ and you even threatened that I couldn't go back to sleep unless I gave you some.
+Early this morning I had the strangest dream — you'd turned into a little kid, tugging at my sleeve and demanding candy⋯ and you even threatened that I couldn't go back to sleep unless I gave you some.
 Waaah, so scary⋯
 It wasn't until 416 shook me awake that I realized today is actually Children's Day. I'm not sure if I was somehow sensing your sweet tooth or if it was just my imagination⋯ Either way, if I didn't follow through, there was no way I could sleep peacefully.
-It just so happens the base was handing out candy today, so! ragged myself out of bed, grabbed a portion, and left it on your desk⋯ That should settle it, right? If there's nothing else, I'm going back to catch up on my sleep now⋯
+It just so happens the base was handing out candy today, so I ragged myself out of bed, grabbed a portion, and left it on your desk⋯ That should settle it, right? If there's nothing else, I'm going back to catch up on my sleep now⋯
-Oh, and remember to store the candy properly so it doesn't melt—I'm not cleaning up any syrupy mess! Mmm⋯ ZzzzzzzZ⋯
+Oh, and remember to store the candy properly so it doesn't melt — I'm not cleaning up any syrupy mess! Mmm⋯ ZzzzzzzZ⋯
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