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Scene 1-2-1

:~~Arriving at Grifon~~ S09 ~~Tactical Command Post~~

:Control center in Area S09 under Griffin jurisdiction.

:Preparing to ~~proceed to the~~ next ~~combat training according to schedule~~ …

:Preparing to commence our next drill as planned …

:Kalina: Sorry, commander …

:Kalina: We ~~were supposed to carry on~~ with ~~combat training~~, but there is a change ~~in plan~~ …

:Kalina: We should be continuing with our Drills, but there's been a change of plans …

:Kalina: ~~Cause right now~~ HQ needs ~~serious assistants~~, so …

:Kalina: HQ needs whatever help they can get, so …

:??: … Let me explain ~~the situation~~.

:??: … Let me explain.

:Kalina: Uh! … ~~Please go ahead~~, ~~Ms.~~ Helian.

:Kalina: Eek! … Then I'll leave it to you, Miss Helian.

:… Video ~~transmission~~ from HQ ~~coming~~ through.

:… A Video call from HQ is patched through.

:Serious woman: …

:Serious woman: Greetings, commander.

:Serious woman: ~~I'm~~ Helianthus, a senior ~~representative~~ of ~~Grifon~~.

:Serious woman: This is Helianthus, a senior acting officer of Griffin.

:Helian: Let’s ~~save~~ the ~~chit chat~~, ~~and~~ just call me Helian.

:Helian: Let’s skip the pleasantries. and for efficiency's sake, just call me Helian.

:Helian: As you know, recently~~, SANGVIS FERRI has~~ launched ~~several~~ attacks ~~upon Grifon controlled~~ S09 ~~district~~ without ~~any declarations~~.

:Helian: As you know, Sangvis Ferri has recently launched multiple attacks in Area S09 without prior notice.

:Helian: ~~These attacks have brought serious~~ blow ~~to our~~ reputation. ~~Therefore,~~ the higher-ups ~~take~~ this ~~situation~~ very seriously.

:Helian: this is a huge blow on Griffin's reputation. so the higher-ups are taking this very seriously.

:Helian: ~~While~~ HQ ~~is intercepting~~ the ~~incoming SANGVIS FERRI~~, they ~~send~~ me to investigate the ~~origin of the attacks~~.

:Helian: As HQ takes on the Sangvis forces, they've also sent me to investigate the reason behind their sudden riot.

:Helian: ~~According to orders~~, ~~commander~~, ~~I need your full assistant throughout the investigation~~.

:Helian: Words from above, Commander, are that you'll be assisting me in my work till it's done.

:Kalina: ~~Mm… Excuse me~~, ~~Ms.~~ Helian.

:Kalina: Hmm… Please hold on a sec, Miss Helian.

:Kalina: Our commander ~~is a new recruit,~~ and has only ~~attended~~ one ~~training exercise~~. ~~There might be a lack~~ of experience…

:Kalina: Our commander just reported for duty and has only participated in one drill. In terms of experience…

:Helian: (~~Sigh~~) … ~~seems~~ a bit ~~forced~~, but we don’t have ~~the men~~ or ~~time on this one~~.

:Helian: (Sighs) … I know this might be stretching it a bit, but we don’t have time or manpower to spare.

:Helian: But don’t worry commander~~, according to~~ your ~~previous records~~, you ~~are up to~~ this ~~task~~.

:Helian: But don’t worry commander. Judging from your past results, you're more than qualified for this mission.

:Helian: As for experience, you can ~~make up for those~~ on the real battlefield…

:Helian: As for experience, you can always get it on the real battlefield…

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:Helian: ~~Reports just came in that~~ enemy ~~activities have been spotted~~ behind the ~~frontline~~. We ~~suspect that it might be a recon force from SANGVIS FERRI~~.

:Helian: According to the latest reports, enemy movements were detected behind the field. We're guessing those are Sangvis scouts.

:Helian: ~~We estimate a small group of enemy~~, but we can’t let them ~~slip by at~~ this ~~critical moment~~.

:Helian: They're very few in number, but we can’t possibly let them roam free in times like this.

:Helian: Please dispatch your ~~echelons~~ to the designated ~~area~~, destroy ~~SANGVIS FERRI units~~ and command ~~post, and~~ prevent ~~leakage of~~ our ~~intelligence~~.

:Helian: Please dispatch your troops to the designated locations, destroy the Sangvis forces and command posts to prevent our intel from being leaked.

:Helian: ~~That’s it~~, ~~commander, do~~ your best, and ~~let~~ us ~~see if~~ you ~~are truly worthwhile~~.

:Helian: That is all, Commander. Do your best, and show us what you're worth.

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 Scene 1-2-1
-:Arriving at Grifon S09 Tactical Command Post
+:Control center in Area S09 under Griffin jurisdiction.
-:Preparing to proceed to the next combat training according to schedule …
+:Preparing to commence our next drill as planned …
 :Kalina: Sorry, commander …
-:Kalina: We were supposed to carry on with combat training, but there is a change in plan …
+:Kalina: We should be continuing with our Drills, but there's been a change of plans …
-:Kalina: Cause right now HQ needs serious assistants, so …
+:Kalina: HQ needs whatever help they can get, so …
-:??: … Let me explain the situation.
+:??: … Let me explain.
-:Kalina: Uh! … Please go ahead, Ms. Helian.
+:Kalina: Eek! … Then I'll leave it to you, Miss Helian.
-:… Video transmission from HQ coming through.
+:… A Video call from HQ is patched through.
 :Serious woman: …
 :Serious woman: Greetings, commander.
-:Serious woman: I'm Helianthus, a senior representative of Grifon.
+:Serious woman: This is Helianthus, a senior acting officer of Griffin.
-:Helian: Let’s save the chit chat, and just call me Helian.
+:Helian: Let’s skip the pleasantries. and for efficiency's sake, just call me Helian.
-:Helian: As you know, recently, SANGVIS FERRI has launched several attacks upon Grifon controlled S09 district without any declarations.
+:Helian: As you know, Sangvis Ferri has recently launched multiple attacks in Area S09 without prior notice.
-:Helian: These attacks have brought serious blow to our reputation. Therefore, the higher-ups take this situation very seriously.
+:Helian: this is a huge blow on Griffin's reputation. so the higher-ups are taking this very seriously.
-:Helian: While HQ is intercepting the incoming SANGVIS FERRI, they send me to investigate the origin of the attacks.
+:Helian: As HQ takes on the Sangvis forces, they've also sent me to investigate the reason behind their sudden riot.
-:Helian: According to orders, commander, I need your full assistant throughout the investigation.
+:Helian: Words from above, Commander, are that you'll be assisting me in my work till it's done.
-:Kalina: Mm… Excuse me, Ms. Helian.
+:Kalina: Hmm… Please hold on a sec, Miss Helian.
-:Kalina: Our commander is a new recruit, and has only attended one training exercise. There might be a lack of experience…
+:Kalina: Our commander just reported for duty and has only participated in one drill. In terms of experience…
-:Helian: (Sigh) … seems a bit forced, but we don’t have the men or time on this one.
+:Helian: (Sighs) … I know this might be stretching it a bit, but we don’t have time or manpower to spare.
-:Helian: But don’t worry commander, according to your previous records, you are up to this task.
+:Helian: But don’t worry commander. Judging from your past results, you're more than qualified for this mission.
-:Helian: As for experience, you can make up for those on the real battlefield…
+:Helian: As for experience, you can always get it on the real battlefield…
 Scene 1-2-2
-:Helian: Reports just came in that enemy activities have been spotted behind the frontline. We suspect that it might be a recon force from SANGVIS FERRI.
+:Helian: According to the latest reports, enemy movements were detected behind the field. We're guessing those are Sangvis scouts.
-:Helian: We estimate a small group of enemy, but we can’t let them slip by at this critical moment.
+:Helian: They're very few in number, but we can’t possibly let them roam free in times like this.
-:Helian: Please dispatch your echelons to the designated area, destroy SANGVIS FERRI units and command post, and prevent leakage of our intelligence.
+:Helian: Please dispatch your troops to the designated locations, destroy the Sangvis forces and command posts to prevent our intel from being leaked.
-:Helian: That’s it, commander, do your best, and let us see if you are truly worthwhile.
+:Helian: That is all, Commander. Do your best, and show us what you're worth.