User contributions
16 May 2017
Story/Normal 1-6 (Part2)/Script
Fixing some issues that were not spotted in the first edit. Apologies. It's not as true to the actual content, but it fits the situation better.
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Story/Normal 1-6 (Part2)/Script
Just some minor changes, and some grammatical(I think) errors being amended. Added a line or two that was stated in the original sentences. Feel free to revert this if you think that it's not as good.
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